plus three”, instead of the model of \Chinese, mathematics, and English are the three subjects that must be tested. Compared with the former model of \English, the students must choose additional three subjects from physics, chemistry, politics, history and geography.
As far as I am concerned, I prefer the present model. Though some argue this model adds to the burden of the students' schoolwork, it, in my opinion, offers a chance for the students to get exposed to more subjects, broadening their knowledge, which is of great benefit to the growth of the students themselves as well as the development of society in the long run. In a word, the present model does more good to the students. 【解析】 分析】
这是一篇半开放式作文。要求考生比较上海高考现在和过去模式的异同，并且表达自己的看法，并分析原因。
【的再表达自己的看法和原因。整篇文章宜用现在时态。 sb. be concerned；get exposed to等。
【详解】这篇作文话题比较贴近学生的实际生活，学生应该有话可说。文章所给提示也很明确，所以难度不是很大。在写作过程中，考生首先要明确两种模式的相同点和不同点，然后
【点睛】所给范文完全按照题目要求，要点明确，条理清楚。长短句交叉使用，使得整篇文章顺畅自然。适当运用了一些较高级的词汇和句式，为文章增色不少。例如：定语从句（which is of great benefit to the …）；非谓语动词（broadening their knowledge）；as far as
