短文改错
(建议用时: 40分钟)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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(2013·吉林模拟)
Dear Dad,
You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it? Why not to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food.
Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving daughter,
Mary
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(2013·广元模拟)
Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hit
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by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. When I went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale.
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(2013·玉溪模拟)
As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually take some exercise. Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.
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(2013·天水模拟)
It’s reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
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答案解析
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答案: Dear Dad,
You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health.
so
I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. am advice
I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it?
Why not to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You
least
can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying
Try
not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of
late
course, this is very important to have healthy food.
it
Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!
accept
Your loving daughter,
Mary
1. 【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so. . . that引导结果状语从句。 2. 【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。
3. 【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。 4. 【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。why not+动词原形, 表示建议。 5. 【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。at least至少。 6. 【解析】将第八句中的a去掉。球类前面不加冠词。
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7. 【解析】将第十句中的Trying改为Try。此处为祈使句, 动词原形开头。 8. 【解析】将第十句中的lately改为late。late表示时间晚。 9. 【解析】将第十二句中的this改为it。it是形式主语。
10. 【解析】将第十三句中的receive改为accept。接受意见用accept。
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答案:
Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit
surprised
by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very
was
careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got ∧the
before to
middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come
his
directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hit
It
by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had the meters immediately
an operation. When I went to see him last night, he ∧out of danger but still looked
was
pale.
1. 【解析】第一句中的surprising→surprised 修饰人时, 要用-ed形容词, 意为“感到吃惊的”。
2. 【解析】第二句中的is→was 时间状语the other day说明事情发生在过去, 故用一般过去时。
3. 【解析】第三句中的after→before 根据句意“他看到绿灯亮之前没穿过马路。”可知用before。
4. 【解析】第四句中got后加to get to到达, 为固定搭配。
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