2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文
Smart Life from Our Smart Mobile Phone 8
It stands out among all the other smart mobile phones that are on sale now and will make your life smarter in an all-around way!
Besides the general functions as a handset，it also serves as a laptop，with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 4G or Wi-Fi model.It is so smart that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.
It is small in size and light in weight，so you’ll feel it very convenient and easy to carry.What’s more，it is a high-quality product sold at a reasonable price.
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