韶关二模作文评讲课学生用卷
注意：在欣赏的过程中请拿出你们的巧手，将其中部分有瑕疵的改得更加完美，好么？谢谢！ 看看：是朽木不可雕也呢？还是可雕琢的一块玉石呢？ 高三（9）班的大作文：
林芳：Having read the passage, I am impressed by the spirit of the sunflower. Actually, it is the spirit of facing the sun that we need in our life.( 对比吴杰璋:I felt astonished when I read this story. )
Only when we are optimistic despite of difficulties and just turn to the sun can we get success. I can’t think of a better illustration of this idea than the example of Li guo Quan. The champion of the Beijing Olympic. Though a majority of people laugh at him, he is confident in himself just like the sunflowers. Facing hardship, he is always turn to the sun. (吴杰璋：Facing the troubles, I alway run away and be afraid of them. ) 廖静媚：
Having read the passage, I am inspired by the sunflower that it always face the sun wherever it is and whatever is standing in the road to stop it. 欧平：
Having read this story, maybe we should consider us whether we always give up facing difficulty. Or maybe we should know it is the way that we must come through. To be true, sunflower is a good example that make us know what is persisitance. Only if by paining could we grow up. 叶永峰：
For these reasons, I am convined of the point that whatever we meet, we could stand tall like the sunflower only by doing that can we succeed.
邹晅煜：As has been noted, we are supposed to be strong in our life. Only stand tall like the sunflower can we lead a rich and wonderful live.
I attach great importance to strong will which can overcome the tough and bad environment.
卢会斌：
Having read the story, I am deeply moved by the sunflower’s spirit. Nowadays, most people may feel too stressful to become happy.
As a student, what I have to face is the pressure from study. Worried about the final exam, I must study hard everyday. But sometimes I became tired. There is no doubt that many students are faced with the same problem. I am look forward to getting good grades, so I can’t give up studying hard, and I hold the belief that I will do a good job on the final exam. Though painful and tired as we are, we reach our goals, which is sensible.
袁梓埠：Surrounded by big rocks, the sunflower grows up firmly and try its best to reach the sun. How strong and great it is! And it occurs to me that we should fight against difficulties that we are faced with and grow strongly.
From my point of view, as a student, I have to smooth away many problems. As is known to all, study is very hard and tiring. In order to beat them, we should set goals for ourselves. By setting goals, we will be more clear about what we should do. Besides, it is of great significance for us to read some inspiring books. From the books, we can know that a lot of great people’s inspiring stories which give us power to fight against difficulties. What is more, it is believed that
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exercise strongthen our bodies and mind.
As the saying goes, When there is will there is a way. I firmly believe that we are able to reach our sun like the sunflower.( 李淑芬/ 林粤梅)：As the old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.
陈细婷：Only in this way, can we do every like sunflower, and only we do like that can we live a comfortable life.
彭成康：In our life, only when we have courage to face the hardship can we do like the sunflower. 邓玉君：From the sunflower, I know whatever we suffered from, we should be optimistic to solve them, like the sunflower around the big rock to reach the sun.
黎国锋：Only if we have a strong will can we make our dream come true.
Only if you go through all the difficulties can you become a tough men, can you make your dream come true, can you become a successful men.
李志伟：Only after we “stand tall” like the sunflower will we reach the “sun”. 蔡君兰：Only when we have a goal can we stand tall like the sunflower. 黎国锋：Only if we have a strong will can we make our dream come true.
Only if you go through all the difficulties can you become a tough men, can you make your dream come true, can you become a successful men.
李志伟：Only after we “stand tall” like the sunflower will we reach the “sun”.
蔡君兰：Only when we have a goal can we stand tall like the sunflower.李娲：As for us, it is no use being negative when the difficulties come to us but we could be positive to face them.
黄细玲：From the mentioned, we should stand tall like the sunflower, only in this way can we solve the problem by ourselves and improve ourselves.
黄双文：In other words, only after go through the difficult experience can we realize the spirit from sunflower- never give up, reach the sun forever! 李梦华：
Learning the quality from the sunflower, I know that under no circumstances must we give up even though we are in disadvantage situation. If we were involved in what we were eager for, work as hard as the sunflower, we would achieve the victory. 黄淑瑶：It’s just a great man standing there uses his life to tell me that just try to stand tall and you can touch the sunlight.
蔡叶生：Faced with hardships, you should believe yourself.
袁华宝：The more pains you have suffered in the way to fight for your goals, and the more likely you will be to achieve your dreams.
黄美芳：Not only sunflower could do this, but also standing tall also is important for human to learn. As far as I’m concern, first of all, we should believe yourself. Only in this can, can you not change your idea or thing easily.
As a result, we should have strong mind to achieve his goal.
刘真成：结尾句：Stand tall like the sunflower, we will reach the sun.
吴小婷： From the story of the sunflower, I think we should realize that only by being brave to face difficulties and hardship can we overcome.
However, never should we have too many goals. Only when we have unique aim can we concentrate on achieving it. Only in that way can our goal be easier to reach.
黄振宇：Driven by this curiosity, I find the answer is that living in a bad environment can strengthen one’s living ability.
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饶秉坤：Facing the rock and the sun, its life becomes more wonderful. 李东京：Only like the sunflower can we acquire a lot of skills.
Worried about being defeated by difficulties, we should become a sunflower that possess powerful energy. In our daily life, we can make a decision when doing something so that everything cant defeat us.
陈瑶：I have read a story that the writer found a sunflower in front of his house, which grew under the rock and made the writer hardly recognize them. The flower grew over the rock and wanted to get the sun.
Having read the passage, I am impressed strongly by what the sunflower have done to acquire the chance to live and stand tall to reach the sunlight. Actually, we might face a lot of difficulties in our study and life, just like the rock. However, few of us can learn form the sunflower to stand tall. When faced with troubles, we should stand tall like the flower and solve the troubles with our determination and bravery.
Take Muhamdas Ali for example. Ali used to be a champion in the Rome Olympic. However, after his retirement, he found themselves having Parkinson disease, which will make him unable to talk or walk. When receiving the invitation from the Olympic organization in 1992, he decide to take part in the game as a fire passer. No matter how difficult it was, Ali decide to stand tall like the sunflower to overcome all of it and he succeeded.
The inspiration often crowds in me that eh life is unable to be smooth and when facing the challenge, what we should do is to overcome difficulties and stand tall like the sunflower.
黄嘉俊：The passage tells us that the writer found a sunflower in his “rock garden”. When he pulled rocks to get to the weeds, he found it had begun under a large rock and grown around it to get the sun.
Having read the passage, I am deep moved and aware that we should also struggle to get your success like the sunflower. Never will it become true that we will not meet any difficulty or problem. So it’s necessary for everyone to try their best to overcome whatever difficulty he or she meets, through which we are able to get our success like the sunflower.
To behave like the sunflower in life, one is supposed to learn to be persistent and optimistic about their problem. With a strong will to solve, he can get progress on the way to his goal or dream.
As a result, facing difficulty, you should show your strong will to overcome it. Only in this way can you behave like the sunflower. Never give up!
小作文： Last weekend, I interviewed Fenn, a professor of psychology, on the connection between sleep and memory. The research shows that mistakes of memory can be reduced with enough sleep and no one is exception. Although the reason hasn’t been found, there are two main explanations. First, it is said that a good sleep strengthened the resource of memory, which was one of the basic points during the process of memory. Second, it will do harm to memory when a person doesn’t have a good sleep and too much information is accepted.
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韶关二模作文
高三（10）班的大作文：
周文健：Only we strengthen our heart and keep lives up, can we stand tall, which lead to a splendid life. Otherwise, we will stay in darkness forever and be bent by difficulties of live.
谭俐明：Reading the little story, there is a strong impact in my heart. I deeply realize that nobody can avoid difficulties in our daily life, but we can always reach the warm sunlight with smiling face.
As we all know, only the little plants, live outside the quite warm room, can live a happy life and have a strong and stable will to face every thundering rain or the severe food. But the flowers which live in a warm room, can not. So do we human beings.
You must live independently with a strong heart if you want to become successful, just like the big trees in the forest. On the other hand, only if you keep a confident mind and give a full smile no matter what you meet can you be able to achieve your dreams.
Living a life just like the sunflower, though you can’t touch the sun every time you want, but you can always keep it in your mind. Come on, there’s a wonderful life waiting for you!
钟远芬：Although there were many difficulties, my parents had strong persistence to solve difficulties. Now I hold a strong belief that only by living a life like the sunflower can I stand taller to reach sunshine in my heart.
黄开瑞：For this reason, facing the bad condition, we should stand tall like the sunflower. 赖召帅：Based on my experience, I think we should take an aim in our life, taking ourselves in the sun to own a happy life. 吴月升：For another, as the saying goes, no pains, no gains.
Not only can we try best to solve plenty of problems, but also we must do our work by heart. 余加敏：It goes without saying that as a youth I was moved by the sunflower. It was the sunflower that made a deep impression on my mind. How determined it was！
刘慧萍：Only when you can finish the three important things can you grow like the sunflower. As we all know, no pains, no gains. Only when you work harder can you stand tall like the sunflower. 王德璋：Facing the difficulty or trouble, we shouldn’t be afraid of those.
刘兴华：In addition, it is under my impression that we should set up our goal and work hard to achieve it. In my opinion, what we should to is as follows. Based on what we should do, we should devote ourselves into the action. There is no doubt that no pains, no gains.
蓝叶锋：Reading this passage, I have many thoughts. As far as I am concerned, I am supposed to insist on my belief. In addition, I think I should be faced with the difficulties in our life. No one can deny that the sunflower is strong. ….
李雪霞：You always tell you where there is a will, there is a way.
小作文： Last weekend, I interviewed Fenn, a professor of psychology, on the connection between sleep and memory. The research shows that mistakes of memory can be reduced with enough sleep and no one is exception. Although the reason hasn’t been found, there are two main explanations. First, it is said that a good sleep strengthened the resource of memory, which was one of the basic points during the process of memory. Second, it will do harm to memory when a person doesn’t have a good sleep and too much information is accepted.
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高三（9）班的大作文： 陈瑶：
I have read a story that the writer found a sunflower in front of his house, which grew under the rock and made the writer hardly recognize them. The flower grew over the rock and wanted to get the sun.
Having read the passage, I am impressed strongly by what the sunflower have done to acquire the chance to live and stand tall to reach the sunlight. Actually, we might face a lot of difficulties in our study and life, just like the rock. However, few of us can learn form the sunflower to stand tall. When faced with troubles, we should stand tall like the flower and solve the troubles with our determination and bravery.
Take Muhamdas Ali for example. Ali used to be a champion in the Rome Olympic. However, after his retirement, he found themselves having Parkinson disease, which will make him unable to talk or walk. When receiving the invitation from the Olympic organization in 1992, he decide to take part in the game as a fire passer. No matter how difficult it was, Ali decide to stand tall like the sunflower to overcome all of it and he succeeded.
The inspiration often crowds in me that eh life is unable to be smooth and when facing the challenge, what we should do is to overcome difficulties and stand tall like the sunflower.
黄嘉俊：The passage tells us that the writer found a sunflower in his “rock garden”. When he pulled rocks to get to the weeds, he found it had begun under a large rock and grown around it to get the sun.
Having read the passage, I am deep moved and aware that we should also struggle to get your success like the sunflower. Never will it become true that we will not meet any difficulty or problem. So it’s necessary for everyone to try their best to overcome whatever difficulty he or she meets, through which we are able to get our success like the sunflower.
To behave like the sunflower in life, one is supposed to learn to be persistent and optimistic about their problem. With a strong will to solve, he can get progress on the way to his goal or dream.
As a result, facing difficulty, you should show your strong will to overcome it. Only in this way can you behave like the sunflower. Never give up!
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