Li Hu
【答案】Dear Mike,
I have received your letter and I have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn
Chinese well. Needless to say, it is a difficult task for many people to learn a foreign language well. Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese well.
For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible. Then I think it is very useful to watch a couple of Chinese films or TV series every week to get your Chinese improved. Thirdly, I think you may try to sign up for some contests, for instance, the Chinese character dictation competition. The valuable experience is beneficial to you. I am sure only if you practise a lot can you master it. Complete mastery demands continued learning. I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese.
Yours , Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义给英国朋友 Mike写一封电子邮件。 【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Mike 给你写了一封电子邮件,说他现在汉语不够好,不知如 何提高。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,提一些学好汉语的建议。内容包括:1.邮件已经收到; 2.建议课内外多说、多看、多听汉语;3.建议同学之间进行汉字听写比赛等。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：at a loss，practice doing，as often as possible，sign up for。还使用了非谓语动词I have received your letter and I have known that you feel at a loss, not knowing how to learn Chinese well.虚拟语气For a start, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。
