Yours， Li Hua
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等． 五、（2016?永州）
在初中三年的学习过程中，不同的学生获得的英语课堂知识或多或少各不相同．请你写一篇英语日记，记叙你所上的一堂英语课的过程和感受．耍求如下： 1、语句完整，意思连贯，语法正确．
2、字数60﹣80词，日记的开头和结尾己给出，不计入词量总数．
要点词汇：sing a song； come into； say hello to； ask sb questions； praise sb for sth； teach sb sth； discuss in groups； help each other； play games； do exercises； with the help of； learn a lot．
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一写自己对初中三年中的一堂英语课的过程和感受的回忆．由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多．动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据让我们写日记这一要求可知本篇短文的时态主要是过去时态和一般现在时，人称是第一人称，还应注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中，应注意描述的全面性；尽量运用要求中的短语句型；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯． 【解答】Monday June 6th
This morning we had an English class．Before class，we sang a beautiful song happily．We said hello to Mrs．Li，our English teacher when she came into the classroom．Mrs．Li asked me a question and I answered it correctly．She was very happy and praised me for it．Then she taught us
the new lesson and let us discuss a problem in groups．She said we should learn to help each
other．In the class，we also played games and did some exercises．In the class，we were all very happy．
With the help of Mrs．Li，I did well in English and I learned a lot．
I like English．I like my English teacher．Let's say\teachers!
【点评】以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅． 六、（2016?重庆）
随着外国游客日益增多，未来科技馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务．科技馆需要应征者提交英文自荐信．假如你叫袁新，你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员．请按要求写一封自荐信． 要求：
1．必须写出三点及以上的自荐理由；
2．词数：80﹣120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 参考要点：
1．擅长英语（英语水平，沟通能力…）； 2．热爱科学（科学知识，创新能力…）； 3…
Dear sir，
I'm a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School．I'd like to become one of your guides． ．
I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance． Thank you! Yours， Yuan Xin．
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一封自荐信应征未来科技馆英语讲解员．注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第一人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1.擅长英语（英语水平，沟通能力…）； 2.热爱科学（科学知识，创新能力…）； 3.其他
常用到的重点短语：
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事 be good at 擅长
that is to say 那也就是说 make sth+adj 让某物怎样
make friends with sb 与某人交朋友
come from 来自
get along well with sb 与某人相处的好 【高分句型】
1．①That is to say，②it's not difficut for me to ③talk with people in English． ①that is to say 那也就是说，做插入语．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
③talk with sb 与某人交流
2．Some new ideas often①come out of my mind，②which has encouraged me a lot． ①come out of从…出来
②which引导的非限制定语从句，修饰前面整个句子． 3．①Besides，I ②feel like making friends with different people，③no matter where they come from．
①besides另外，给出另一个理由
②feel like doing sth 想要做某事，make friends with sb 与某人交朋友 ③no matter where无论哪里，引导的让步状语从句．come from 来自 【解答】Dear sir，
I'm a junior student from Chongqing Xinhua School．I'd like to become one of your guides． I've learned English for 6 years．I spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies，so I'm good at English．That is to say，it's not difficut for me to talk with people in English．【高分句型】（擅长英语）
I have been interested in science since I was a child．My favorite books are on science．Some new ideas often come out of my mind，which has encouraged me a lot．【高分句型】With these ideas，I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable．（热爱科学）
Besides，I feel like making friends with different people，no matter where they come from．【高分句型】I'm sure that I will get along well with them．（乐于交友） I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance． Thank you! Yours， Yuan Xin 【点评】这是一篇应用文，注意信件的格式．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理． 七、（2016?海南） 假设你是李明．上周日你班举行了一次毕业聚会．请根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友 Robert 写一封邮件，向他描述聚会的情况及谈谈你当时的感受．
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥； 3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数 80左右．（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Hi Robert，
We had a graduation party last Sunday．… Long before 3：00 pm，all the s tudents in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall．Our teachers and parents were invited to the party，too．First，ourmonitor made a speech．He thanked our teachers and parents sincerely．Next，we gave presentsto each other．The most exciting moment was the show time．We sang，danced and played games．Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh．Everyone was so happy．I think the wonderful party will always be in my mind． Do you have such a party？Please write soon． Yours， Li Ming．
【考点】提纲作文．
【分析】这是一篇应用文，让我们根据图片内容写一描述毕业晚会的邮件，内容是开放的，需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力，把这些内容补充完整．由题目可知，写作时要用第一、三人称，时态主要为一般过去时，内容要点包括：聚会情况以及当时的感受． 重要短语及高分句型： have a graduation party 举行一次毕业聚会
give presents to each other 互送礼物 tell a story 讲故事
Long before 3：00 pm，all the students in my class couldn't wait to come to the hall． 下午三点前很久，我班所有的学生就迫不及待地来到大厅．long before在…前很久，can't wait to do sth．迫不及待地做某事，两个短语用得好．
Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh．
我们的英语老师讲了一个让我们所有人发笑的故事．tell a story讲故事，make sb．do使得某人做某事，make使动用法，后跟不带to的不定式．which made us all laugh是定语从句，作story的定语．
First，our monitor made a speech．
