圆学子梦想 铸金字品牌
with great fun. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?
（2012·辽宁卷）
假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法,内容主要包括:
优点:1.话题广泛;
2.图片丰富;
3.有助于提高学习兴趣。 建议:适当降低词汇难度。 注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
One Possible Version Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.
Best regards,
Li Hua
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【思路点拨】
(1)本文是一篇提纲式作文,该书面表达为应用文中的书信写作,属传统的指导性写作。写好此文,需注意以下几点:
一是时态把握要准确。文章基本时态为一般现在时,同时兼顾其他的时态。 二是要点要齐全,且详略得当。题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求,要点作出了明确的规定,这些要点不能有遗漏。写作重点可放在对于教材优点的介绍上面。 三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,使行文连贯流畅。 (2)通过审题,归纳出本文内容要点如下:①肯定现行教材;②赞赏教材的三点优点;③一点建议。这三点为基本点,缺一不可。 (3)内容要点:
话题广泛(a variety of topics) 受欢迎(be popular with) 过去常常(used to do)
建议做某事(suggest doing sth. ) （2012?全国卷I）
假定你是李华,从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam,
Regards, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua 【思路点拨】
(1)本题是一封电子邮件,要用第一人称写。由于文章内容是申请参加一个夏令营,需进行自我介绍,说明参加意图,因此,本文应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 (2)本文要包含以下要点:①自我介绍 ②参加意图
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③希望获准。最后,写上期待对方答复。 (3)内容要点:
参加(take part in/participate in)
讲流利的英语(speak fluent English/speak English fluently) 被接受为(be accepted as)
期待答复(looking forward to your reply)
（2012?全国卷Ⅱ）
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:
1.时间:周五晚8点至9点 2.地点:学生俱乐部
3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4.要求:备小礼物 注意:
1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。 Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.
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